On March 19-23, 2012, at Ojai Valley School we learned about poetry. I loved it, because I used to try to write it with my mom. In fact, we learned a lot of new vocabulary in ESL Writing with Mrs. Cassidy and Mrs. Andrews. For example, I never knew that poetry is just another way of writing that been written in a more fancy way. However there is one thing that I hate to; do- group work. It is important to do, but I never got along with other people and I probably won’t. but because I like to write poetry, it’s fine. In addition I will show you one of my poems. It is a cinquane. I hope you enjoy it!
Desert
Sunny, sandy
Dying, hardly-living, drying
In the middle of nowhere
Emptiness
i am awesome!!!!
ReplyDeleteNo one ever said working in groups was easy, but I am glad you realize that about yourself. Being honest with oneself is the first step in growing up. Good job, Maria!
ReplyDeleteThat is a very nice poem. It is short, but I like it very much!
ReplyDeleteWow deserts~ I can feel the hotness hahahah
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